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  1. June 11th, 2002, 11:51 AM #11
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    Cool

    Am I the only chump who remembers a rather ****** program called "Tube Tales"?

    Look here and cry...
  2. June 11th, 2002, 04:16 PM #12
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    Cheers for the input guys!

    After writing this i relised that writing dialogue isnt totally about writing clever or funny lines - its about writing lines that are appropriate for your character. Character is behaviour and your lines should show that behaviour. I think the reason John wasnt as strong as Guy is because he had no reason for being. I mean Guy had Eve as his conflict and John didnt really have anyone.

    Anyway i suppose if there was some sort of plot to it then it would be alright.
    Thanks again
  3. June 13th, 2002, 06:35 AM #13
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    Rather clichez ridden:

    *********s
    - its the system -
    - mystery woman -
    - tube (subway) -
    - hippies -

    and so many more I lost count
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